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我翻看评论,看有说语句不通的,认真的想了一下。这应该是我没注意,用白话+普通话写的问题。

我重读了几遍文章的,也注意到一些问题。

趁着书还不是太多章节,我打算全部精修一下,整到语句通顺,合理逻辑化一些人物,丰富人物形象。

今天返修,大概率应该是更新不了。

其实有些懒得再修改。

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